atouts: (013; l'arcane sans nom)
john childermass ([personal profile] atouts) wrote in [community profile] limacharlie 2017-04-05 03:44 pm (UTC)

A couple would have been overdoing it. You only need to reference the peninsula once every few sentences, not several times in one.

[ Look, there's a lot of things he could say here, but he's just going to settle the lowest hanging fruit for now. It's a tropical island, he's on vacation, no need to try harder than that. ]

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